Second Dan.
Shelby J.
Unlike everybody's essays where you get reasons why they should be seen to attempt fora belt, I am going to try something completely different. My reason is well, I cannot write like that. It is boring to expand something that can much more easily be summed up in a few sentences into a very boring essay. Let us quicken this pace up, make it at least a little interesting, and see what comes out.
There are reasons that are basic, like reliability and all that jazz. That is often very common to hear in an essay fora reason. Reliability means nothing if you do not see anything that could be an obstacle to this reliability. What separates me from the pack on this?
I juggle a lot on my schedule. Not as much as some, but more than others. I have school, as most others, but being a middle school student, I tend to have homework and projects that could block my time off. What most do not know is that I play computer games whenever possible. They are addicting, and it is hard to get me off them, so yes, that becomes a realistic obstacle. Fortunately, I do come to class on time, prepared, and prove the reliability that I deserve.
Conclusion, that one itty-bitty little reason might not be enough to some, but you have to think about all the meaning that tiny reason has. Reliability is useful in many modem jobs.
Another reason would be dedication. That is pretty important. Dedication means that not only you are reliable, but also you are devoted to doing whatever the task is.
Since I have been around for what, five years, I think, I would believe I am a dedicated person.
Why should I be considered for second dan? Simply because I am the kind of person who can do it. Anybody can make first dan, but only a few of those stay around long enough to try for second. You can say what you want. There are not enough reasons, or that there is nothing that makes this different from everybody else's papers, but I know the reason for both of those concerns.
Look at who wrote the essay. Does it really need to be explained, or is it just obvious she can do it? That is up to you, I suppose.
